ext_278523 ([identity profile] pupnamedpeter.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jaune_chat 2009-07-25 05:46 pm (UTC)

I just... Wow. This was totally awesome, and I loved that you described in detail the physical changes Luke's body was undergoing. It made it seem a lot more plausible, instead of just waking up and being like "Hey, I have wings, cool!"

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