ext_68154 ([identity profile] miss-miso.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jaune_chat 2009-07-27 10:17 pm (UTC)

This is such a gem, I can't even begin to deal. What an inspired piece of writing - it's moving, funny and warm hearted, and a joy to read. I adore Micah, and think we didn't get to see enough of Molly on the show, so this was a real treat. I wasn't sure about the pairing (I'm not keen on early teen pairings in fic), but I love your writing and I'm glad I trusted you. This is a sweet virtual relationship, based on mutual goals and a meeting of the minds (the pair of them grumbling about Mohinder getting captured *again* was hilarious), with a shy promise for something more when they meet. Besides Mohinder's fugitive!fail, I loved the sly observations about the show as well:

“This Claire person is going to get kind of mad if you keep putting people in her house,” Molly warned one night. “Two in a week? That’s kind of dangerous. And the puppet man is creepy!”

LOL! I questioned that too.

Fantastic work!

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